How does my Design compare with the others?

I entered this design contest for a college ad and I wanted to know your opinion about how my entry compares to the other entries.
The designs can be found @ http://www.uhwo.hawaii.edu/uhwo/poll/

It is too balanced add some movement. I like #7, #8 but didn’t vote incase you have an opportunity to improve it. The color choises in your’s are the most “Hawiian”. It’s not bad. When you get to school I think you will do well. here is a list that you might find useful:

elements:
line
color
shape
value
space
form
texture

pricipals:
balance
empasis
movement
harmony/unity
pattern
rythem
porportion

I would also add; isolation (either by color or form)

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